Edit letter has come and let the hacking begin!!! I love editing, because, as fun as the purely creative drive of the first draft provides its own high, it's edits where the magic happens, where the art is finally crafted closer and closer to a finished entity, able to go live on its own out in the world.
I've forced myself not to look at the manuscript for months. And when I came back to it, editorial suggestions from my fabulous editor in hand, I can suddenly SEE it with fresh eyes. And yeah, then go in with a hack saw to pages at a time. All this shit I thought was necessary for character building, sooooooooooo slow--hack out all the boring crap, keep the heart of the cinematic, emotional moment, get back to the moving action, the active tension. I love editing because in my mind it seems like sculpting.
The first few drafts have created a real living entity on the table, but it is blunt, awkward, and ugly (not to say that it wasn't hard as hell to get it that far, but still, it's not ready for the world to see). The edits are the crafting of the crescendos and diminuendos of action, all working toward a truly dynamic climax at the end. Each scene should have shape to make it cohesive, cause-and-effecting as it goes. The middle and second half are really where most of this work needs to be done.
After the plot gets shaped up, then I want to go through a pass at the language level--making sure the most potent moments of emotional impact are the most lyrical, and the language of dialogue is unique and distinctive. Here's to the Hermit Cave of Edit-land, kids. I raise my glass to toast, and I'll see you on the other side.
Upcoming 2012 Maserati GranTurismo Reviews And Specification
2012 Maserati GranTurismo Preview and cars wallpapers
Safety
Safety features include: front and side driver and passenger airbags, adjustable head restraints, carbon ceramic Brembo brakes, Electronic Brake Force Distribution, Traction Control, Tire Pressure Monitoring, and Stability Control and more.
Safety
Safety features include: front and side driver and passenger airbags, adjustable head restraints, carbon ceramic Brembo brakes, Electronic Brake Force Distribution, Traction Control, Tire Pressure Monitoring, and Stability Control and more.
Upcoming 2012 Jaguar XJ Reviews And Specification
New 2012 Jaguar XJ Preview and cars wallpapers
The 2012 Jaguar XJ continues the tradition of the well-known high-performance, luxury British brand now owned by Indian Tata Motors. This model has a reputation for a large space, powerful engine and comfortable ride
The XJ and XJL Supercharged models have a 470 horsepower, 5.0-liter AJ-V8 engine, 6-speed automatic transmission, 20-inch Kasuga wheels and Four Zone Climate Control. The Bowers & Wilkins 1200W surround sound system, Media Hub and Adaptive Dynamics provide for an enjoyable and comfortable ride.
The 2012 Jaguar XJ continues the tradition of the well-known high-performance, luxury British brand now owned by Indian Tata Motors. This model has a reputation for a large space, powerful engine and comfortable ride
The XJ and XJL Supercharged models have a 470 horsepower, 5.0-liter AJ-V8 engine, 6-speed automatic transmission, 20-inch Kasuga wheels and Four Zone Climate Control. The Bowers & Wilkins 1200W surround sound system, Media Hub and Adaptive Dynamics provide for an enjoyable and comfortable ride.
Upcoming 2012 Mercedes-Benz S Preview and Specification
2012 Mercedes-Benz S Preview with cars images and pictures also Some Reviews
The 2012 Mercedes-Benz S-Class, likely making its debut at this fall's Frankfurt Auto Show, will mark the 11th generation of the large luxury sedan.
2012 Mercedes-Benz S History
Since Mercedes-Benz’s flagship came about nearly 40 years ago, the car has consistently enjoyed heralding as one of the benchmark ultra-luxury cars. After all, it was the car that virtually invented features like seatbelt pretensioners and countless mechanical technologies enjoyed by many other brands today.
2012 Mercedes-Benz S Safety Features
Despite the lack of specs, the new S-Class is guaranteed to match or even exceed the current model’s safety specs. That basically equals state-of-the-art safety gadgets that not even a Volvo could touch. For instance
Frerrai News: http://wheelx.blogspot.com/search/label/Ferrari%20cars
The 2012 Mercedes-Benz S-Class, likely making its debut at this fall's Frankfurt Auto Show, will mark the 11th generation of the large luxury sedan.
2012 Mercedes-Benz S History
Since Mercedes-Benz’s flagship came about nearly 40 years ago, the car has consistently enjoyed heralding as one of the benchmark ultra-luxury cars. After all, it was the car that virtually invented features like seatbelt pretensioners and countless mechanical technologies enjoyed by many other brands today.
2012 Mercedes-Benz S Safety Features
Despite the lack of specs, the new S-Class is guaranteed to match or even exceed the current model’s safety specs. That basically equals state-of-the-art safety gadgets that not even a Volvo could touch. For instance
Frerrai News: http://wheelx.blogspot.com/search/label/Ferrari%20cars
Upcoming 2012 Mercedes-Benz C Review
2012 Mercedes-Benz C Review and Cars wallpapers
The new 2012 Mercedes-Benz C-Class is expected to be available for order by July 10, 2011. The new C-Class was featured at both the 2011 Detroit Auto Show and the 2011 Geneva Auto Show. A new turbocharged four-cylinder engine, designated the C-250, is available in the 2012 model.
Expected Safety Features
The 2012 C-Class has several new safety features, including an active blind-spot assist that will warn a driver if there is a car in the blind spot. Another new safety feature is a lane-keeping assist that will cause the steering wheel to begin vibrating if the car judges that it has left the lane
The new 2012 Mercedes-Benz C-Class is expected to be available for order by July 10, 2011. The new C-Class was featured at both the 2011 Detroit Auto Show and the 2011 Geneva Auto Show. A new turbocharged four-cylinder engine, designated the C-250, is available in the 2012 model.
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Expected Safety Features
The 2012 C-Class has several new safety features, including an active blind-spot assist that will warn a driver if there is a car in the blind spot. Another new safety feature is a lane-keeping assist that will cause the steering wheel to begin vibrating if the car judges that it has left the lane
upcoming 2011 Jeep Grand Cherokee 4x4 Review
Upcoming 2011 Jeep Grand Cherokee 4x4 Review and cars wallpapers
Model: 2011 Jeep Grand Cherokee Overland 4X4
Engine: 5.7-liter V8
Horsepower/Torque : 360 h @5,150 rpm/390 lb.-ft. @ 4,250 rpm
Transmission: Multispeed automatic
Wheelbase: 114.8 in.
Model: 2011 Jeep Grand Cherokee Overland 4X4
Engine: 5.7-liter V8
Horsepower/Torque : 360 h @5,150 rpm/390 lb.-ft. @ 4,250 rpm
Transmission: Multispeed automatic
Wheelbase: 114.8 in.
Length x Width x Height: 189.8 x 84.8 x 69.4 in.
Tires: P265/60R18
Cargo volume: 35.1/68.7 cu. ft. (rear seat backs up/down)
Fuel economy: 13 mpg city/19 mpg highway/14.9 mpg test
Fuel capacity: 24.6 gal.
Curb weight: 5,210 lbs.
Sticker: $45,240 (includes $780 destination charge and $3,340 in options
2012 Ford Focus Hatchback First Impressions Review and wallpapers
2012 Ford Focus Hatchback First Impressions Review and wallpapers
The 2012 Ford Focus will be a true world car, with a single-vehicle architecture and design language for all markets. Learn more about the 2011 Ford Focus in this 2010 Detroit auto show special from the automotive experts at Motor Trend.
2012 Ford Focus - First Look - Auto Reviews - Car and Driver Learn more about the 2012 Ford Focus - First Look now. Find auto reviews . got a warmed-over version of the first-gen Focus sedan and hatchback.
The 2012 Ford Focus will be a true world car, with a single-vehicle architecture and design language for all markets. Learn more about the 2011 Ford Focus in this 2010 Detroit auto show special from the automotive experts at Motor Trend.
2012 Ford Focus - First Look - Auto Reviews - Car and Driver Learn more about the 2012 Ford Focus - First Look now. Find auto reviews . got a warmed-over version of the first-gen Focus sedan and hatchback.
New 2012 Ford Focus ST Car Review And Wallpapers
New 2012 Ford Focus ST Car Review And Wallpapers
the complete global Ford Focus line-up of three production-ready dynamic bodystyles will be displayed together, providing customers with a full insight into this significant new model before it goes on sale in Europe and North America early in 2011.
Ford is also delivering on its promise to introduce a global performance version of the new Focus with a world premiere for the exciting flagship of the range, the muscular 250 PS Focus ST.
Aston Martin Cars News: http://wheelx.blogspot.com/search/label/Aston%20Martin%20Cars
the complete global Ford Focus line-up of three production-ready dynamic bodystyles will be displayed together, providing customers with a full insight into this significant new model before it goes on sale in Europe and North America early in 2011.
Ford is also delivering on its promise to introduce a global performance version of the new Focus with a world premiere for the exciting flagship of the range, the muscular 250 PS Focus ST.
Aston Martin Cars News: http://wheelx.blogspot.com/search/label/Aston%20Martin%20Cars
2011 Honda Accord SE Sedan Reviews and wallpapers
2011 Honda Accord SE Sedan Reviews and wallpapers with cars specification
WE are uploading Now Honda Accord Review: 2011 Honda Accord SE Sedan Driven – Car and . The Honda Accord lineup sees increased fuel economy and some minor changes for 2011. Read driving impressions and see photos of the 2011 Honda Accord sedan at Car and Driver.
A bold and sleek exterior conveys a prestigious presence from the outside, while premium interior styling extends from the passenger compartment into the cargo area. Increased functionality is2011 Honda Accord Sedan Overview - Official Honda Site See reviews, features and specs of the 2011 Honda Accord Sedan at the official Honda Web site.
Honda Accord SE sedan carrying a 2.4-liter I4 engine with five-speed automatic. The vehicle is capable of producing big power is 190 hp at 7.000 rpm rotation. With an ideal vehicle body is 3.312 lb, the Honda Accord SE able to cross the street snow today.
WE are uploading Now Honda Accord Review: 2011 Honda Accord SE Sedan Driven – Car and . The Honda Accord lineup sees increased fuel economy and some minor changes for 2011. Read driving impressions and see photos of the 2011 Honda Accord sedan at Car and Driver.
A bold and sleek exterior conveys a prestigious presence from the outside, while premium interior styling extends from the passenger compartment into the cargo area. Increased functionality is2011 Honda Accord Sedan Overview - Official Honda Site See reviews, features and specs of the 2011 Honda Accord Sedan at the official Honda Web site.
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